All Comments on 'Bitten'

by VampJenai

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catman71catman71almost 14 years ago
hmmmm

good start , but a little jagged , hope to see chpt 2 soon

VampJenaiVampJenaialmost 14 years agoAuthor

thanx so much for the feedback ! Bitten 2 will be coming soon. . . .

mariasmdmariasmdalmost 14 years ago
aww

great beginning. i can't wait to see what happens. angel comes across a bit psycho to me so, thats really interesting.

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