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Click hereWith that, G-Money steps forward and gives me a bitch slap with the back of his hand, then another one to knock my head in the other direction.
"Fucking white cunt boi went and got my rage up when I was in a chill mood until now. Mutha fucker slating my name! the bitch won't be laughing when my name is branded on its ass!"
"Chillllll G, Monique says to him. It's all good, just gives you more reason to not hold back on the bitch boi when we have the time."
Before I have the time to comprehend what the crazy bastard just said, Amy struts back into the foyer with her leash in hand. Walking up in between G-money and Monique, she stares through my soul with an evil smirk on her pretty face as she waits for one of them to take hold of her leash so they can leave.
"Damnnn bitch! You making my black nuts tighter than a virgins asshole seeing you in that rubber dress, pheeewwww!!! And I thought you were 100% boner-inducing material when you are in your school uniform, but this??? DAMNnnnn!!!" G-Money says in an excited tone to the agreement and laughter of the other three lunatics. "Anyway, let's get the rolling to the party; we are already late as fuk for the action. See you two at the club in a while. As for the bitch boi!!! We ain't finished with you by a long shot, be back to sort you out."
With that, G-Money and Monique turn and walk towards the door with my
teenage daughter tottering behind them on the chain leash.
"NoooooGGGGGGG, Amyeeeeyyy, don't go witGGGG Ahemmmmgggggggggggg, Amggggeeeyyy!!!!" I weakly screech out as the amazon like Mistress Tasha behind me chokes me out as the front door slams shut to the sound of Amy's distinctive giggling.
- COMMENTS
beta_sissyalmost 2 years agoAuthor@eightOeights, thanks for the constructive criticism, but it is not war and piece, it is some lighthearted erotic writing. As for the grammar issues you mention? I am confused about that? I write my stories and check them with Grammarly Pro which highlights errors.
beta_sissyalmost 2 years agoAuthorWell said and thank you, Hadess. Some people must be stupid if they see a story headline and a mention that the story contains racist tones, and then get angry at the content. Thanks for liking my story so far.
I intend to write more for this and my other stories, plus new ones, but this website's uploading delays and rejections became so frustrating that it has put me off writing longer stories. It took 2 months of trial and error to get this short published. It was rejected many times for simple things like a grammar mistake. I will be adding to it in time, just not sure when.
beta_sissyabout 2 years agoAuthorThank you for the comment Eight0eights, but I have to ask about my grammar mistakes? I am sure there may have been a few, but I check my stories with Grammarly Pro before posting anything. I am surprised to hear that you noticed many. Sometimes Grammarly flags certain sentences, but I disagree with it because Grammarly does not see the sentence in a way people naturally talk and how I want a sentence to come across to the reader. Grammarly often wants to change a sentence to sound more proper.
beta_sissyabout 2 years agoAuthorThank you Hadess, I even wrote a warning at the top of the story making note of the racist language. Future chapters will have much more in it too.
I take no offence at the haters, as you say, everyone has their thing. I find it funny how some people will actually read a story that makes it obvious what the storyline is going to be about, then all they do is bitch about it.
It is like me reading a sci-fi themed fetish story and then moaning about it, I know the sci-Fi them in regards to fetish stories is not my thing, so I stay away from reading them.
beta_sissyabout 2 years agoAuthorHaha, @anonymous, OTT much? As for violent marches and cancel culture, I am against both and all for free speech. Go and have a cry, you wet lettuce.
