by durantftw
Boge should go home and divorce the lying slut. What was supposed to be an adventure for both turns into one for just her. He's already caught her betraying his trust and it's pretty easy to figure out she's holding secrets. I'm sure photos will show up for him to catch her. Especially getting involved with a nosy couple, trying to make you like them.
Written in simplistic style I thought. Only an observation, not a critcism. I couldn't stop reading. Very erotic. 5 stars. BTW. Pay no attention to the anonymous critics trying to apply real world ethics and morals to your work of fiction. Bottom line. Did it turn you on? If not, why read in the first place. You're in my favorites and I'll be coming back to check on more in the future. Keep writing
Loved how this is pure lust and horniness, can tell how turned on you are by this fantasy. Couldn't stop reading and looked forward to each part.
Fantastic plot and ending. Loved how each woman had 7 BBC's each, and that each Stud got to empty inside them. Especially loved poor hubbie thinking his wife had only had one.