by Robarreto
Human or machine!
If human then for pity's sake please get a grammar and syntax checker before publishing.
And please try to keep to the same case and preposition in the same sentence!
The story itself is quite good but it's let down badly by how it's written.
If English isn't your first language then PLEASE get a proof reader.
The husband/father should went and got his shotgun out and went to town on the three of them..