All Comments on 'Black Sex for White Women Ch. 10'

by Robarreto

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syn4321syn4321about 2 months ago

Simple but beautiful!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago
What was this written by?

Human or machine!

If human then for pity's sake please get a grammar and syntax checker before publishing.

And please try to keep to the same case and preposition in the same sentence!

The story itself is quite good but it's let down badly by how it's written.

If English isn't your first language then PLEASE get a proof reader.

AnonymousAnonymous16 days ago

The husband/father should went and got his shotgun out and went to town on the three of them..

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