by calmAndStrict
I was waiting for a confrontation and its outcome. Bravo. Amazing story. I am sure all the readers have their opinions about where to take the next chapter or two, but the author clearly has things under control. I was certain the chapter would end with a spanking, but again I was pleasantly surprised.
ethics violation...funny. The length of the chapters, the intimate details, and the speed of the action are ideal. The astronomical scores you are earning are well-deserved.
ethics violation...funny. The length of the chapters, the intimate details, and the speed of the action are ideal. The astronomical scores you are earning are well-deserved.
Chapter 4 is on the way!
As long as this story keeps getting positive feedback I intend to update it at least once per month.
Looking forward to seeing where the story goes. Enjoying so far. I like the rules and how Ana had to recite them and record herself. I hope to see some more humiliating rules and Ana recording herself saying humiliating things to send to Andrea.
Good story,
It keeps a thrill which is very addictive to the readers.
Keep up the good job. :)
good story here. I love how Andrea can be so dominating one second and so caring the next. The mind work going on in Ana's mind is great. Love both the office scene as well as the gym. love the public scenes as well. can't wait to see what happens in class. Hope to see a chapter four soon. 5 stars!
Pappasleaze!
Its been a while a story had me fingering myself like his. Great,,, and can;t wait for Ch 4
God this is so hot , personally would but break a lot faster excited to read the next chapter when it comes out
Please don’t stop this story, for the love of god. You’re writing is incredible
I’ve followed all chapters and would love a fourth. Good writing and storyline.
Okay, I feel guilty. I find myself cheering for Andrea. Every aspect of Ana’s dilemma is of her own making. Who is so stupid to not cover up tattoos or wear unique jewelry in a porn video? Hubris and greed should be punished.
Team Andrea, just saying.
I always appreciate smart characters. They make the story more compelling and it helps to maintain non-consensual dominance in a public space. I'm enjoying this series very much. Access to Andrea's thoughts is interesting.