Blackmailed Couple II Ch. 13

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Back down in the courtyard, two of the men had stood and were helping Annie from the pool. Water cascaded from her protruding breasts as she was lifted and carried over to a waiting chaise lounge. Mark marveled at the workmanship that had gone into Annie's breasts. He had argued against making them as large as they were and had lost that battle. They would have looked ridiculous, almost cartoonish on Anna. But Mark had to admit that they suited Annie perfectly. Even from the distance that Mark was watching, from the café's second floor windows, he could see Annie's tits bounce with each step as the man carried Annie to the chaise, causing Mark's cock begin to stir in spite of himself. The man carrying Annie set her down onto the chaise and swiftly removed her bikini bottoms and tossed them aside. He spread her legs and without preamble, went right down on her, burying his face between her thighs. The other two guys had taken position at the head of the chaise and Annie took one then the other alternately eagerly into her mouth. Mark sighed again then decided to go down to the courtyard himself to consult with Doc and Linda about the plans for the evening.

Mark took the elevator down to the ground floor and out to the courtyard to where an observation area had been cordoned off so observers could watch without fear of being seen by the cameras. By this time Annie was fervently riding the black guy, his hands firmly gripping her massive tits while another was being serviced by Annie's talented mouth. The third guy was standing off to the side stoking himself seemingly awaiting his turn. Mark approached Doc and Linda and tapped Doc on the shoulder to get his attention. Doc turned. Mark asked in hushed tones how it had gone with Eydie. Doc gave Mark a 'thumbs up' and Mark allowed himself to have a little hope.

Their conversation was interrupted by a squeal from Annie. Mark looked up to see that the guy that had been stoking himself had moved into position behind her and was mounting her ass even as she was still impaled on the guy below. Mark knew how much it Annie loved DP and now she was about to become airtight. Mark settled in to watch the show.

Blackmailed Couple II Ch. 14

Mark stayed to watch the entirety of Annie's scene as it was captured by the new high-tech cameras out in the courtyard of the group's mansion. In all the scene ran a little more than an hour in length. Once the director had called it a wrap, Annie was handed a towel. She used it to wipe off some of the ejaculate from her face and her chest. She then used it to sop some up that had leaked out from between her legs. Annie tossed the towel aside then went and gave each of her fellow performers a kiss. She was then approached by a crew member who handed her something. Mark couldn't make out what it was. Annie said something to the crew member and he followed her from the courtyard into the building. Mark wondered what that was all about.

To be continued...


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LoriRobinsonGaLoriRobinsonGaover 1 year ago

Nowriterl just to let you know that you took my comment virginity 2 stories ago I hope you are proud. Okay so that was a lame attempt at humor. But now that I have found my comment voice I have all of your prior stories along with rainyseason747 and a few others that I will be adding comments to. I see now how good/ constructive and even negative comments can sometimes stir the creative juices. Again you have me emotionally invested in the fates of Anna and Eddie and it's quite the rollercoaster. Anyway I appreciate the time and effort you have put into this story and I truly hope when I do write my story I am able to match your story writing ability. Take care.

NoWriterINoWriterIabout 3 years agoAuthor
Not dead.

Just delayed. Life getting in the way.

Chapter 14A is nearing compltion.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

No new chapters this year, and nothing from the author in over two months; is this dead? 🤔😕

MrWilburMrWilburabout 3 years ago

I certainly hope the author will continue this story to it's conclusion. Great first effort.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Direction

I have been reading this to see where it would go. Not being a fan of this type of a deep cuckolding story, Anna should be the focus of the story line in my opinion. From what has been written so far, it appears as though Anna/Annie has had a dual personality/mental illness from the beginning. I see no evidence of the same in Eddie/Edyie. The story seems to be around the mental battle within the woman. The cocaine use is one way to keep Annie in the forefront and doing what the story line has established. I'd like to see what her slide down the rabbit hole into a crack whore looks like. Finish her off to a smoking drug addicted porn star stripper slut and end it. But have fun with it on the way down. Maybe she goes to shooting heroin too and brings Edyie along in the partying, becoming the drug addicted partner to her decline...she can suck tit and blow cock all at the same time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Keep going

Just found this story and wow.

Have to slightly agree with other reviews that would like to see more of Eydie but disagree that the rest is boring.

Part of the reason want to see more of Eydie is how great the Annie story is.

Please keep going and can’t wait for more.

And the Monty Python part was perfect to cut the tension

trianetrianeover 3 years ago

So, once again we've been put through yet another chapter that's largely dedicated to detailed accounts of Anna/Annie's story while Eddie/Eydie is once again kept on ice. It's quite evident that you're significantly enamoured with "developing" Annie, and all but uninterested in paying more than cursory attention to Eydie, despite her being the only genuinely novel / interesting part of this story. We're quickly devolving into a de rigueur "everyday-average-wife is brainwashed, given physics-defying tits and turned into a slut/whore" stereotype, which is fine I guess, it's your story after all, but it nevertheless represents a terribly wasted opportunity to explore a story with some actual novelty, all in service of the banal...

At this point, Eydie would need 2-3 dedicated chapters just to restore even a sense of balance, but it seems almost certain that she's instead headed towards yet more chapters of blithe, unconsciousness / "healing" "in Vegas", that will be briefly glossed-over at the beginnings or ends of otherwise increasingly repetitive chapters detailing Annie being graphically fucked over (one way or another), while we, the audience, grow increasingly bored with the rapidly dwindling novelty of the whole enterprise.

Also, since we seem to be stuck on this train more or less indefinitely now, how is it at all reasonable that an organization as large, well funded and advanced as the one depicted here, with such an enormous investment of time, effort and money riding on the line, somehow DOESN'T have their pet project under total surveilance, 24/7/365? There's no conceivable way that her every action on their grounds wouldn't be monitored / recorded, probably from multiple angles, ESPECIALLY in her quarters! The artifice of her somehow "hiding" anything from them, let alone a secret telephone, a bag of coke and all of the associated paraphernalia is both cognitively and rationally absurd...

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Awesome Story

I was hoping for the next chapter before xmas. Thanks.

I hope there will be more Transformation in the next Chapter, as much as the Sex Scenes with Annie are fun, I hope Eydie will go to Vegas soon.

I am looking forward to Annie and Eydie Meeting again.

Keep up the good Work.

Best Wishes

btw. i loved the Joke, it really made me laugh

FirstwithUFirstwithUover 3 years ago
Please Rescue or at least retribution.

Thank you for continuing the storie. I like it much better than the original that got realy weird and off track. I really hope this has a positive outcome and conclusion. I'm feeling for this couple and what these Ministers have done to them.. loved the Monty Python reference. "Nobody expects the Spanish inquisition", was a very funny skit. When do you expect the next chapter to be ready? Its Still 5* from me

keep it going.

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