by ESTECZ
Your English is very good and story was intense, sad and sexual. A second part would be wonderful.
I love the story and you know it :D Wonderful and emotional! Waiting for your second chapter!
5 stars from me!
The beginning is interesting and promises a very interesting story, although it is a bit scary with blackmail and forced prostitution and beating at the end.
You write very beautifully, giving it a lot of emotions, changing the pace of action and showing people from different positions.
I am very impatiently waiting for the next part.
SissyBoy from Warsaw; Poland.
Początek jest interesujący i zapowiada bardzo ciekawą historię, choć troszkę przeraża tym szantażem i zmuszeniem do prostytucji oraz na koniec pobiciem.
Piszesz bardzo pięknie, nadając temu wiele emocji, zmian tempa akcji oraz pokazania osób z różnych pozycji.
Już bardzo niecierpliwie czekam na kolejną część.
SissyBoy z Warszawy; Polska.
What a refreshing kind of storytelling ESTECZ. I am anxiously anticipating reading your next part later this evening.
Stockholm syndrome has been used to unearth deep passions from oppressed, conquered and bullied people I think, even prior to there being such things as war. That’s why the thought of being protected by Wilhelm - Eva’s former bully - makes her cream in her panties when he makes love to her, deep inside of her well trained holes.
Maybe all submissive t-girls have at one time or other enjoyed the erotic enjoyment of some form of corporal punishment by a ‘daddy’ figure in their youth.