All Comments on 'Blind Girl's Bluff Ch. 03'

Good story line, the conversation banter is great. Let the story continue.

It's obvious that this chapter didn't work well for most readers. Any guidance on what to do to improve it -- or should it just be re-written? Was it the shift in narrators? Was it the BDSM elements? I sincerely appreciate comments or private feedback that gives me insights into how to do better. Thanks for reading.

I think that the chapter could have done without the type of revenge that she did. But other than that, I liked the chapter. Will there be another chapter? I hope one that he meets her parents, and she finally realizes that she has a good thing and quits treating him like a simp. Maybe he should stand up to her more and show her how good she really has it with him. I look forward to the next chapter thanks

1star this is written for men only

i hated it it was super boring

also it was hard bdsm and definitely not light bdsm

i hate threesome

u should tag it group sex and not romance

u should tag it

i love bdsm non con and dark stuff but only when it btw one guy and one girl

this was the most boring chapter

two woman one man and anal sex this is pure male fantasy

and has to do nothing for us women

this was supposed to be romance btw two and not anal sadism with 3rd party

this pure male only fantasy of ours completely ruined my mood

if geoffery did this to sophie it might have been hot

but involving a third party

there was zero romance

just a male priveledge of being able to sodomise a chick

i hate sophie now she was so possessive of him and now she is deliberately ruining her relationship with the very chick veronica

i wouldnt be suprised if geoffery too cheats on sophie with veronica sophie fucking deserve it for opening her closed relationship so she suffer the consequences

also i hate u now for potraying sophies character as villain to justify a male fantasy of geoffery or yours

all male writers have this same problem

whenever they want to force a threesome or bdsm with threesome they always mske the gf as villian and put the whole blame on the female character

sophie was so mad on veronica for stealing cal and now sge herself put geoffery in a plate to veronica

no we woman dont function like this we dont sabotage our relationship by involving other woman not even sophie

u made a disaster when u even thought that any girl would do this

only men wants threedome with two women and that too rough and painful sodomy

so stop projecting ur male fantasies through the narration by female character

again i love bdsm and dark erotica but this is trash

this was supposed to be a romance btw two people

a threesome is never romance

its just boring sex that only men likes

when u write ffm threesome u only invite male readers clearly tell women readers to fuck off

and now its just cheap porn threesome anal sadism

u clearly dont know what light bdsm is

also light bdsm is done btw lovers and not threesome

the reason people liked the first 2parts coz it was btw two lovers

and people hated the third part coz now it has lost the ver element which brought readers to this ie romance

u cant force roamnce with veronica

this 3rd part was typical male jerk off story which involves degrading anal deliberate pain and humiliation of woman at the hands of a man ---- this will only cater to male reader amd woman with dicks

coz most woman will find only pointless anal sex and degradation in it

no woman will be able to relate with this side of sophie ,sorry but we dont share our men even for revenge like u men do

In my mind, this is still about the relationship between Sophie and Geoffrey but I can see that I'm blurring lines that I should steer away from. Thank you. That helps.

I'm a male reader and didn't care for this chapter at all. The problem was not the narrative change, but the change in perseption of Stephanie. She was much too mean and spiteful. She treated Geoffrey like Cal treated her. You destroyed a nice loving story with this chapter. To all the female readers, please don't assume this fed into male fantasies. Love and sex can and should be better between two people.

Agreed with mazofrank. At first it was almost cute, the little belittling stuff. But then she kept it up to the point where it was clearly not a silly joke, but meanspirited abuse. And trying to electrocute his testicles for shits and giggles? The POV character in this chapter deserves to be alone with her badass, abusive self. All alone. This chapter earned its score. Loved the previous two.

Well THAT sure as hell is a change! Hmmmm?

It isn’t the topic/events with Veronica that leave me uneasy, it’s finding out that our heroine is mentally disturbed. I find myself telling Geoffrey to run n like hell! 3.4*

Well now I don't know if I want to keep reading more of this or move on to something better..