by GradStudent
Definitely needs a Ch 2 or more. A very well thought out and written story. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.
General idea of story was a nice turn-on. It seemed to jump from first date to pulling down the Speedos and the "servant" aspect did not seem to follow. I would have enjoyed a little more sharing by the women with the guy.