All Comments on 'Blindfold and Handcuffs'

You must have been absent from school when the class discussed pronouns! Obvious glaring misuse detracts from an otherwise good story. Have someone proofread your stories before submission.

I'd've rated this higher if you hadn't littered it with grammatical / spelling errors and not rushed through the ending.

Really liked this one - but I agree with the other comments - it felt a little rushed at the end! Good start though!!!