All Comments on 'Blindfolded and Waiting'

One star.

This wasn't a story. It was just some sex. We have no idea who these people are or why they're in a hotel room. We don't even know if they're married. How does she know it's a stranger? She can't see him or her. If you're going to play BDSM or fetish games at least do the readers the courtesy of posting this garbage in the correct category. This was nonsense.

1 star

Yes, present tense blows. I think the only thing worse is second person.

Very low...1*

when a man with little imagination or insight tries to write a sex scene from a woman's pov.

More garbage.

Another trash writer joins LW. One Star, nothing more needs to be said.

Another new author trying to post something, not a story, before they're ready. Trying to be edgy just didn't work here.

Don't worry about the infantry, they got butchered at Gettysburg and haven't got over it.

Could have been worse

Could have been in second person

(shudders)

What happened? Did you cum and run out of energy?

This made absolutely no sense to me.