All Comments on 'Blindfolded, Cuffed, and Used'

I find the intermittent evidence of the lack of proofreading to be a problem. For anyone used to a finished process, this kind of thing breaks a tempo and brings the reader back to his/her current setting rather than letting the reader stay in the moment. The writing is engaging, but the poor spelling, inconsistent tenses and occasional fractured sentences hurt the story's effectiveness. Clean it up, and your readers won't be jarred out of it as they read.

enjoyed how they both enjoyed using/being a toy. definitely check grammar and spelling if you write some more!