All Comments on 'Blindfolds and Black Lace'

shit raping a woman---The writer should learn how to write and if he intends to write as a woman should learn about women

I agree with the first post, except I will add the word "raw", since this story was posted without it being edited or even broken into simple paragraphs. It rates an F. You flunk freshman english Michele.

You need to learn how to write first. How to use grammar, spelling, paragraphing, quotations, etc.

Then, get a good editor. The entire story from the woman's perspective is totally ridiculous.

As a final thought, give up your writing and do something else that you're skilled at.

I love any rape story when the woman is impregnated and not hurt. :)