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teenage fantasy was hot but the boys are simps for pussy its a big turn off and all these gangbang whores eager for these boys who arent even independent is a laugh.

I was hooked to read it but don’t care for the ending. Emilia did this willingly but I question a case of mind control by the guys and a midlife crisis on Emilia’s part. Jim was the innocent victim here as from the beginning of their marriage he was a provider for the family. Their only son leaving and an empty nest adds to Emilia’s mental state .

I've read several stories with this theme, some better than others. The reoccurring fault I find is they resort to "slut control" much too early in the story. I've known a few women in my time, none would have willingly submitted to that kind of verbal abuse so early in a relationship, if ever. It detracts from and makes the story less believable...IMHO.

Hmmmmm, liked the concept but never like endings where the family loses. Would like to have seen a little revenge on the three at the end. Maybe legally or the son kicking their asses one at a time. Or maybe a surprise ending there the husband ends up being stronger than anticipated and fucking the wife’s shit up good at the end. I don’t know. I’m left with an empty hole with stories like these, as usual. No closure I guess.

I hated it.

Oh man! I remember this story. It was a good one!

For a teenage boy fantasy its meh....

Writing too choppy, poorly written with the idea trying to combine several stories into one. Good concept but terribly executed. Two stars.

An excellent first story! Thanks.

i loved it

Spectacularly emotional and deep. For a slut story, it's amazing. Well done!

Better it stayed lost....

Hey folks, I see those wonky lines cutting through the text from time to time and have resubmitted the story with edits to hopefully clean that up. Sorry about that!