All Comments on 'Blood in the Darkness Ch. 03'

by kinkybunny123

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gnome_man about 3 years ago

Story - nicely done.

Anonymousabout 3 years ago

A great bit of work

I love the premise of your story, you get an "A" for originality. His name is well done. I come to Literotica to find stories of romance that are told by romantics. I miss romance in my life as I get older, but I do not want the encumbrances it brings because I am dying.

The only thing I would suggest is to go easy on manifesting cars and big items, to remember in the end he is a vampire and their love must be on an equal footing. Also write a novel! You are good. Sorry I am having a problem logging in but when I do I will comment further. You have a good mind.....Kerry

Anonymousabout 3 years ago

BRILLIANT!

Please carry on with your story it is turning into one of the best!

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