by tsar7
This could be made into a decent story but the writing was mechanical and nothing interesting.
So, she gives blow jobs, big deal. What makes them so special?
She sucks, she swallows he son comes home.
I just wrote your story.
Nothing about hickies, nothing about what makes her blow jobs so special...that's the meat of the story and you left it out.Terrible, simply terrible.
This story had potential, but no details.