by Fishnet
even though chapter 2 wasn't as hot as chapter 1, i did enjoy it more than most. would like to see the owner of the cabins and especially the son to become involved in the next chapter. keep them coming
The story was very good. Both chapters so far are believable and sexy. The only complaint I have is the overuse of exclamation points. They end almost every sentence. Other than that, the stories were wonderful reads. I wish I could get my wife to do this.