by Fishnet
The story was very good. Both chapters so far are believable and sexy. The only complaint I have is the overuse of exclamation points. They end almost every sentence. Other than that, the stories were wonderful reads. I wish I could get my wife to do this.
even though chapter 2 wasn't as hot as chapter 1, i did enjoy it more than most. would like to see the owner of the cabins and especially the son to become involved in the next chapter. keep them coming