All Comments on 'Bodies Ch. 01'

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Please do not make this another story that gives him a 4 or 5 inch dick, There is no way in the real world that she is going to go for that.

You always leave out the other characters in your stories, like when the girl dumps her BF or the BF dumps the other girl. I think a separate story with Lisa and Mandy. It’s weird to say this, but I want to know what happened to the other, like I actually wanted a separate story about both of the girls and her finding new love. The characters that you dumped have potential for a separate story, please consider that for your next project.

-Dillon.

It was good until the murder subplot, that really came out of left field