All Comments on 'Bored Fran Ch. 05'

by jonthechaosman

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honey_licker1124honey_licker1124about 10 years ago
I'm beginning to believe...

that her Master is her husband. How else would the Master had known what she did or didn't say that first night? And he is enjoying his "new" wife, with no explanation.

Still one grammar point bothers me. When you write the text of the note, it should be in quotes.

Still 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Good job

I hope it's a husband and wife teaming owning this couple so the husband gets to have his fun with his Mistress.

SparksWillFlySparksWillFlyabout 10 years ago
John Never Called

Because he has a brain and wants to be happy.

javmor79javmor79about 10 years ago

I can't believe people don't get it!!! JOHN IS THE MASTER!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Little, no, or miscommunication is a weak plot device . . .

The whole plot hinges on his not asking and her not telling. Very disturbing personalities, who seek to be controlled, or who seek to control clandestinely. Simply submits to an unknown tattoo? This woman is as stupid as this plot.

Oh, but stupid women are so sexy and erotic. I'm wearing my hand out reading this.

chytownchytownabout 9 years ago
Thanks***

For almost finishing this story.

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Submissive, or dominant, they both suck.

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