All Comments on 'Bottled Dreams Ch. 02'
by wallcleaner
- 6 Comments
Anonymous2 months agoThis is very cute and fun! I love how innocent both of them are, despite her being a djinn. Looking forward to reading more!
Whitewaterbum2 months agoReally liked the plot. 5 stars. However I have two points that affect reality. First Djinn duplicated only one bill to pay for clothing and extras. Our US Treasury takes a very dim view on counterfeit money when all the bills have same serial number. Treasury will not know if the people spending the money are only passers or the counterfeiters. If Djinn loses her powers, she’ll not be able to correct situation. Hope I’m wrong. The second point is her use of the description of a piston action, if she has been locked in bottle for 800 years she would not likely in her former life come into any contact with a water driven piston operations to be able to reference their action.
Kerrion2 months agoLoving the story and her reactions to things. Can't wait for him to get frustrated in a class and say "I wish I knew more about this stuff", and she grants him the knowledge of literally EVERYTHING about the topic to the point where he's beyond a master at it, knowing things not even realized about it yet.
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Skiingphotog4 days agoI love the Djinn POV of this series. Here's hoping you keep writing... PLEASE!
wallcleaner@wallcleaner
