by gkang96
If there was some character build up! But felt I didn't know enough about the situation! Is she married? Did she meet him somewhere recently? Is she dating this guy?
WHO ARE THEY? Gave it a 4*
I have never commented on a story before. However, this story just simply does not flow. She was sucking her doms cock when, in the very next sentence she has a ball gag in. Makes no sense!
Agree with the other comments that the scene shifts are a bit abrupt, and makes the reader temporarily lose his/her place, but the Giant man and the woman characters are interesting, based on their dialogue and actions. Would love to read more about this couple.