by DoubleTroublemaker
I hate stories where the victim is aroused. She should be fucking terrified! Angry! Anything but aroused.
What emotions would you be feeling if you were told you were going to be raped, that no one knew where you were, that you could be killed and you would just be another missing person.
Would you be turned on or afraid? My money is on afraid. And with good reason.
I like this chapter better than the last. I really like how Ella continues being defiant and feels really strong but also isn't stupid. I'm also having a blast seeing Leo through her eyes. I love that he's a total psycho, probably mob boss, and this just feels like he knows he could have romanced her here, probably in less time, but this was more fun.
I can't wait till we get the reason from him but I love that you aren't exposition dumping but rather Giving us snippets throughout of who he is