All Comments on 'Bound To Her Past Ch. 01'

by desirous452

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NHyuman80NHyuman80about 4 years ago
A little too much inner monologue

It’s good, I can’t wait for pt 2, but sometimes too much detail distracts from enjoying the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Very well written

You are a very good writer. The piece is very well written. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please submit the next chapter soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Perfect, Love the slow build!

This story is incredible so far, and I am already reading part 2 and loving it just as much!

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