All Comments on 'Bound under Her Boss's Desk Ch. 05'

i am glad she now knows to be a good girl she has to admit what she really craves. now it is time for her next step, maybe punished in front of peers or loaned out to another office big wig. she has to be outed somewhere somehow.

Usually I don't like this kind of plot, but this is good!

4 stars for me

This is such a great story. I love how she is upset about the situation while still being submissive for him. Her anger and worries about the situation seem to be very realistic for her situation. I wish he would keep her under his desk while others are in the room or maybe even expose her to someone. Even though I hope you'll keep in realistic and won't expose her to the whole office. You could also think about adding toys to the situation in order to remind her of her place when he can't have his dick insode her.

Thank you for this story and I hope my suggestions don't come off as to demanding they're just things I would find interesting.

Sorry it’s too much bullshit for me, humiliation and degradation are not a compulsory part of a D/s relationship, she doesn’t want it ALL of the time, he is relentless with it and he’s not willing to accept that limit. I’ve only skimmed this and the 6th chapter and I don’t plan on reading any more but I’m willing to bet there hasn’t been any talk of limits and safe words and there won’t be either.

Having read it up to this point I’d also be willing to bet that he’d had a relationship with a woman who cheated on him. It’s a fantasy story and your concept of a Dom is nothing I recognise. Best of luck with your writing, I’m out.

Tess (uk)

This is my favorite story on here. When will we get a chapter 7?!!!! Please!!!

He keeps telling her that she is very good for the office and very efficient at her job and then tells her that she is going to be his slut every time she steps into the office. He can't have it both ways. There has been no talk about limits or safewords. There as been no talk or concerns about aftercare that needs to be between them to build up trust so that the sub will know that the master will not go beyond simply beating the sub. Hopefully now that she has submitted, maybe there will be some talk to establish her relationship both in the office and outside. I am with Tess from the UK in that he so far has not demonstrated his appropriate worth to be a dom. Right not, all he is a sadist and that is a big difference.

hot dialogues

glad you didnt just push down the anal stuff on readers yet

you managed to make it hotter w/o a single gross anal stuff that the usual bdsm shit other writers

force us to read

what i honestly feel about this is that its more noncon and humiliation stuff rather than the bdsm that makes it hotter

also i felt that she aint naturally submissive

he is conditioning or forcing her into submission which she accidently for his gud luck ended up liking

he just happens to be lucky i guess

its more like stockholm syndrome she is bound and locked with him not giving her a fair chance and time to realise and say no

even when at last he was finally asking for consent he was distracting her by pinching her nipples and clouding her judgements with arousal

why is he asking now and that too all while pinching her when he had already forced himself on her w/o even explaining what he was expecting from her and confusing her more

he should have asked for her consent even before touching the very first time w/o her permission her shouldnt he? normally thats is safe sane bdsm relationship

i feel she aint given a fair chance and reasonable time to understand that she is supposed to be a sub and what must be her role

so this is forced relationship and she is a forced sub coz she clearly lies btw a dom and sub and not completely sub i mean she is more reluctant and afraid

she doesnt trust him as a master so he doesnt earn it yet

sub put blind trust in their master but she hesitates

the trust is the foundation of any relatioship especially bdsm

she is afraid to put herself in his hands coz he has only forced ,manipulated ,coerced ,mindfuck her into it

he is still far from earning her trust and he fails to understand it

also aftercare and tenderness are completely missing here which is necessary to keep the dub compliant

he only shows her roughness,punishment ,humiliation ,coercion

his gentle part is missing

he would end up breaking his fucktoy with only punishments and giving zero rewards

so its more of noncon rather than bdsm and it should be tagged as non con not bdsm