All Comments on 'Bowling Alley Bullies'

Pleasantly surprised by the happy ending! Great read.

Great read and super ending.

Excellent writing. Notice how well the dialog moves the narrative forward. Was there not a Nico at every American HS? The badass with a certain sly vibe? King of the Cretins but smarter than all of them put together?

To be perfectly honest, I wasn't going to read this story when I saw bullies in the title. However, I loved "Road Trip" so much that I thought I should at least give this one a try. Glad I did, this had a really sweet ending.

Hot and surprisingly cute. I’m very invested in them as a couple and would like to see some of these consensual shenanigans. You’re a very good writer