All Comments on 'Brad and Steph Ch. 02'

"Steph watch as Chris fucked her from behind. She couldn't take her eyes off of their bodies slapping together. Brad pulled Steph up a little and grabbed her tits."

Who is Chris? Do you edit?

Besides the little mishap of the name slip (maybe you should get an editor, it will only make your job easier and the story that much better) the only thing I can say is that I wish the chapters were longer...much longer. Feels like I've only read a paragraph or 2 and then its over. Please make them longer. Other than that....I am really liking the story so far as well as the characters :)))

Loving it so farr... Can you finish cynthia also?? Thats A Great story, i would love to see more of both.

ok who's Chris??? While having sex she said Chris....wth?