Brainstormed Ch. 01

i mean the dude knew she lusted after money and still married her. first rich asshole comes by and shes gone. she isnt all that smart but neither is he

Please tell me no one is this stupid⭐️⭐️

Awesome story line cant wait to read part 2

Wow. Read chapter 2. How is Becca selfish. Sigh smh.

Well she is like most women selfish and immature, not really a woman you want to be married to

An original spin on the oldest topic. This story has me wanting to read more now, on to part 2!

I enjoyed it. A little far fetched.

A little far fetched, but the author's usual well written work. I need to see how it goes from here.

There are a lot of moving parts in this plot. So far, a lot of words, a lot of setup. It’s a lot of reading, just to reach her decision to cheat. IMO, the characters seem very ‘stiff’, they don’t feel like real people.

As for the plot, she doesn’t have a good reason NOT to tell Nate that she’s working with TRPB. He discussed his decision not to invest immediately, she should have felt comfortable telling him that she’d been their first success - she would not have to discuss the details.

I have not decided whether I’ll continue to chapter 2.

I am very much enjoying this story. My wife asks why I enjoy cheating/revenge/divorce scenarios. I tell her I like the suspense and unpredictability. Will they divorce or reconcile? What led them to cheat in the first place? Which spouse is more at fault for the cheating? The scenario the author has created is very interesting. He has us sympathetic to the woman who is about to cheat. I am anxious to find out how it all works out on a number of levels. That's all I'll say, so as not to reveal too much of the story. Worth reading. Well written.

I stopped after page 2. I know it's a story but he real.

Would people really set all that up just to give someone.

Come on man?

This seems to be an easy fix. If she is the only one that is being recorded, bring in her husband to be the one that she has sex with. Problem solved!!

A reason for the wife to become a whore. No man is going to prostitute the love of his wife when he knows he's innocent of the totally transparent frame up. This company wouldn't need to be completely dependent on the porn industry for funding. This woman is a teacher, how far advanced could that field become if detailed training could be passed on with this technology? The government would invest billions into something like this.

I will read the last page of the second chapter and hope you don't put some sick,implausible bullshit about this couple surviving her being a whore and him having so little respect for either of them to allow this situation to happen.

Lovin’ it and look forward to the next part. It is well written in the extreme. I can avoid disbelief in the details in order to enjoy a great dramatic story.

This will be added to my list of MUST reread!

Thanks

chapter 2 is uploaded and waiting to be approved.