All Comments on 'Breaking And Entering With Steele Pt. 07'

I am sorry, but the story is starting to get as though you are starting to just fill space. No guy on earth past 18 that is like AJ is described would put up with the bs that you have him doing. You cannot betray the character one way then have him go the opposite the next minute. A guy would leave before he did that. Woman can act quite differently sometimes, but guys have a pattern. They are very consistent in that pattern until he has had enough and then walks away. Unless you are taking your male character into the sci-fi realm.

I have to second motion everything that BigGuy441956 just said. Where in the everlovin fuck are you heading with this?

I'm enjoying AJ and Abbey a lot when they're together. But I honestly came close to giving up on the rest of the story once you got solidly launched into Melody's psycho tirade. You need to make your point soon or I'm out of here. 3/5

The step mom is crazy he needs to run as fast as he can

what a bitch!

Is AJ austic? Just asking. Obviously extremely sheltered. But does not make sense for a man pushing 30. Melody is unhinged