All Comments on 'Breaking And Entering With Steele Pt. 08'

Does it come with a pool or is the beach private?..

LOL sorry I just had to ask, that foreword had me grinning.

Oh and the story is making me wonder what the heck is going on with the protagonist, but I still have to read. It's intriguing, so see you in the next chapter.

For those hoping or demanding that I make a point, get to it, end it, and get it over with, I must ask, is this how you approach life?

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In one breath, you're emphasizing that this is a work of fiction. And in the next breath, you're suddenly comparing your fiction to reality. You don't get it both ways. You were teetering on the edge of losing my attention as a reader by the end of the last chapter because your story seemed to ramble on endlessly with psychotic episode after psychotic episode. I guess that is your idea of reality. I stopped bothering to read any further than the introduction. It's a shame that you're offended by legitimate questions about the direction of your story.

I'm done following this story since it's devolved into stupidity. 🙄 1/5

Having a fun ride.

I am enjoying the story. I hope you keep writing it.