All Comments on 'Breaking News Ch. 03'

This chapter is quite different than the two in this series that have posted before it. This chapter is filled with raw, tender feelings and emotions and best represents who we are as lovers. We think it is intimate and erotic, we hope you like it...

Mmmm it is very different. I loved the tenderness and the gentle approach….Especially enjoyed the shower scene with Snowy and Ashley….

Not sure about the secretary in the office….hehe just joking, I love my character…..

This is the best yet……

Wow. that was so very erotic and loved and enjoyed the way the tension built up gradually. Very well done!

Whoooah this sure hit the spot(s). And wasn't that Ashley such a peach. Hope you had as much fun writing as I had reading.

I'll be going back and catching up on the other two chapters.

Keep at it, please.

Oh my so tender and gentle. What a wonderful way to loose your virginity….

So beautifully written, thank you…Phew…