All Comments on 'Bred by the Hive Ch. 04'

Well written story, but man Greg was one weak willed fool. It's better that the hive will have full control of him soon because he has seriously poor decision making skills.

You're such a killjoy (yes, pun intended)!

It's unclear what the Joy copy will do, and it's like you've combined Invasion of the Body Snatchers and the Stargate: Atlantis Wraith into one kind of being. While the story seems to have a purpose, it's a rather convoluted one, and focuses more on the sex than on the "mission." 4