All Comments on 'Bred by the Hive Ch. 20'

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deviantdovedeviantdoveover 1 year ago

I admire what you did there. Marion goes through so many seemingly conflicting emotions while seducing her son, which makes her feel like a real person. Especially the scene in which she is caught between tying her son in and feeling sorry for him is great. Although the 'rider' and weird alien stuff is not my cup of tea generally, I was surprised that it added another layer to this incest scene. Good job.

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