All Comments on 'Breeder of the Kingdom Pt. 02'

excellent

Love it :) honestly its a fun story to follow and all the options. I have this head canon for it that there is constantly a ton of logistics issues for the girls that he doesnt see. Constantly multiple women arguing/fighting to be the one to go see him. I admire your ability to tell a story in little more than 3k words. I always over do it. Im trying to reach your ability though.

My only piece of feedback, because I love your work, and I know english isnt your first language is possibly seek the use of an editor on lit? There are a few typos here and there, nothing that detracts from the story but I know there are sticklers on this site thay ding scores because they feel above seeing any sort of typo.

Excellent work 5/5 stars :)

Thank you for your kind words.

So about mom being at the top, I think it should have been someone else, a new Queen, moms already had her rule with the father. Now it's time for a younger fresher generation. Just my opinion though. Still an interestingly entertaining story.