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All Comments on 'Breeding Dream'

by bruingrl

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

The narrators eyes were closed and she saw him roll his ryes?? Remember point of view. Goofs pull you out of the story. Good luck!

MistressMissy08MistressMissy08almost 2 years ago

This was a fantastic story! I'd love to read more!!

ForestgodlingForestgodlingalmost 2 years ago

Good stuff. You need a beta reader...that change in POV is a problem. You've got a hot imagination though.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

In liked the clit being licked sucked part

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