All Comments on 'Breeding Young Raven Pt. 04 - Teams'

Loved you breeding me in the bar line. Took me by total surprise, hopefully my creaming and squirting can keep you occupied

An excellent series, I was hard throughout. Would have liked for Kara and Ravens personalities to have been seperated a bit more, with Raven as the wanton dirty talking slut and Kara with a slightly higher classiness than you gave her

Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the input. I will consider it in the future.

Enjoyable series and looking forward to reading more of your stories and a more in this series.

Liked it until the ending. The ending was a bit jarring. Would have liked to see how the couples developed more distinctly before including more potential players.

Got turned off as soon as they started sharing raven and quit reading

It lost the eroticism once it just became a free for all. Why would Mark go through the claiming of raven in the earlier chapter just to have her not even know which of them would be knocking her up. Lost any connection and any interest at that point.