All Comments on 'Brett's Visit to the Club'

Well I was left extremely disappointed…it’s an unfinished story that gave no clue as to why Ellie is doing this to Brett. It’s basically 3 stories where the writer let his imagination go wild with direction in sight. The writer couldn’t even have Brett ask questions other than “how can you afford this house”. Basically, this turned from what I thought was a fun and erotic tale of an employee getting the one up on her boss due to a bet, and it became a story about woman imprisoning a man with no reason given. It truly is a story with great possibility, if the writer could find direction and answer some questions to keep the reader interested. Unfortunately the writer only posted the 3 stories in this series and that was in the ballpark of 6 years ago…sadly, I don’t think this series will get finished.