All Comments on 'Brother, Can I Suck your Dick?'

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AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

You NEED to find someone who can edit these mistranslations into English.

redlion75redlion7510 months ago

Too hard to follow

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

- Daddy, what are you doing?! -

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NO!

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English uses quotation marks and ONLY quotation marks,

WhitewaterbumWhitewaterbum10 months ago

Interesting story but hard to follow when you switch from full name to nickname. I think was written in an other language. Translated you should use English names to allow reader to follow the action better. Hope there will be a next chapter.

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