All Comments on 'Brother Sister Just Wanna Pt. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Couldn't read this. Please get someone to proofread your stories. It's annoying when you start spelling words wrong right in the title summary.

JobewonJobewonover 1 year ago

Putting them in a four way relationship has ruined the story. It was a story until this chapter.

Feruris2000Feruris2000over 1 year ago

Keep it going dude but try to make it a little longer each time please.

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