All Comments on 'Brotherly Love Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Couldn't. Awful Grammar and word choice. (eg. Discourse vs. discussion)

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

not nearly enough to be erotic at all. there needs to be a fulfillment, a conclusion to the episode between them, the pay off that wraps up the story. leaving it off where it was was just disappointing.

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