All Comments on 'Bullied into a Schoolgirl Sissy Pt. 03'

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BJGoodheadBJGoodheadabout 1 month ago

The mother should be given the chance to explain that she only accepted because she hoped that her son would develop into an Alpha...

Otherwise, complex story, well written and with well developed characters.

LavanderHazeLavanderHazeabout 1 month ago

Great a story. I loved this chapter. I can’t wait for the next chapter. Please, be quick!!!!

Something I’d like to see is more interactions with other characters and dialogue. But so far, the story is going amazing

DaveyPirateDaveyPirateabout 1 month ago

What do you have against proper quotation marks? Your incorrect use of tildes and apostrophes makes this difficult to read. You at not E. E. Cummings, please use proper punctuation. Other than that I do like your story, please continue.

AnonymousAnonymous30 days ago

I could pick10 other stories and lay over this one like a template. This could have been a decent story of a kid manipulated into the situation and vowing to make everyone pay before they could do it again, including the school, the slut girlfriend, the asshole axiom and even his mother. He would make them pay before carving out a new life that didn't include the traditional career, wife and family he had dreamed of. At least it wouldn't happen again. Good versus evil

AnonymousAnonymous30 days ago

I like strong women, not weak little wimpy subs.

AnonymousAnonymous30 days ago

I'm loving your story. I'm going to read part 4 now.

AnonymousAnonymous23 days ago

Hope he gets revenge on his evil mother. I hope he blows the school up

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