by MademoiselleChatRose
The mother should be given the chance to explain that she only accepted because she hoped that her son would develop into an Alpha...
Otherwise, complex story, well written and with well developed characters.
Great a story. I loved this chapter. I can’t wait for the next chapter. Please, be quick!!!!
Something I’d like to see is more interactions with other characters and dialogue. But so far, the story is going amazing
What do you have against proper quotation marks? Your incorrect use of tildes and apostrophes makes this difficult to read. You at not E. E. Cummings, please use proper punctuation. Other than that I do like your story, please continue.
I could pick10 other stories and lay over this one like a template. This could have been a decent story of a kid manipulated into the situation and vowing to make everyone pay before they could do it again, including the school, the slut girlfriend, the asshole axiom and even his mother. He would make them pay before carving out a new life that didn't include the traditional career, wife and family he had dreamed of. At least it wouldn't happen again. Good versus evil