by MademoiselleChatRose
Not a big fan of psychological battles. It's better when sissy accepts herself fast.
This story started off strong but the last few chapters turned me off. I found the breaks in dialogue made the conversations hard to follow, a lack of dialogue in general makes it a less interesting story to begin with so having paragraphs of exposition in the middle of a sentence pulls the reader out of the context. Should have had less characters with more depth rather than introducing new characters every chapter, this results in poorly fleshed out characters with 2 dimensional motives. And finally I hope this sissy gets revenge on her mother who sold him like an old couch.
Frustrated that this story never actually explained more about the school other than "I sold you to a science experiment"
I really Liked this storyline. I hope you write the epilogue and continue writing similar stories. I would like see how Sia coaches or helps Sophie adapt to her new life.