All Comments on 'Butterfly Ch. 03'

by GBwrites

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DevilbobyDevilbobyover 2 years ago

Love affair reunited, Beautiful sister, best mates wife who knows but I am willing to wait and find out.

I was looking for a romance, think I've found it, feel a bit down at the moment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
Ridiculously short

For goodness sake get on with your story instead of these tiny parts.

TonyspencerTonyspencerover 2 years ago

No names, no pack drill? Apparently not seen each other for years, relatives? Cousins? Different generations! he's "almost 40", she's a young woman, presumably younger, uncle and niece? She's married and an air hostess, he's well, unknown. Within the first chapter she's committing adultery, and he has no qualms about it? How is this a romance and not a Loving Wives story in the wrong category? How are we supposed to relate to them when we still have no clue who they are after 3 chapters?

Sorry, not for me.

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