All Comments on 'Calibration Pt. 02'

by bluefintuna

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I love it so far! I would love some degradation, or resistance, or maybe some accidental hypnosis...

PrimalRootsPrimalRootsover 2 years ago

Uncanny! Like it was written especially for me! Keep it up, this is very fun. If you're taking requests, maybe somewhere down the line she'll enjoy watching him with someone ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Some things that you may not have thought of...

Daniel gave her post hypnotic command with the stuff about Rebecca's roommate; if those commands continue to affect her, then his early commands from part one about getting pleasure from the words "mindless" and "empty" and also that Rebecca things of Daniel as her "master" and addresses him as such should also be in effect.

You may need to do an edit, or change her later reactions/thoughts/responses.

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