All Comments on 'Calibration Pt. 05'

Why stop indeed. Do continue without prejudice as the say.

Fascinating beginning, but then somewhat repetitive. Part 5 again showed some promise, but much more is needed. Proper use of his two, then more sex slaves could make this an exceptional story. Hell make the girls whore for him, make porn films, do dogs. The point is more and variety is needed.

Thank you for sharing, hope you continue this,

amyMac, a writer elsewhere