All Comments on 'Camping 101'

Just another stupid cuck story. Should be a separate category for cucks versus BTB's in Loving Wives. Wonder if cuck stories are a reflection of the authors lives? 1 star since there is no ability to give a ZERO rate.

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This guy has an emotional range which goes all the way from A to B.

A BS story of wife swapping and a weak husband.

Geez. That was horrible. If this is all you have to offer you should stop. Or get an editor at the least.

Dont give up your day job

Well, the old saying "Don't quit your day job" applies here. This writer didn't listen in class during his formative years. I don't mean this as an insult, but more of a suggestion that the writer would be better off reading, not writing.

The correct spelling is clothes, meaning garments that are worn not what the clothes are made of,ie cloth. Also a shutter is what goes over a window. The correct word you are looking for is shudder which is a physical reaction.

The story itself I found mechanical.

No real story, just a bunch of people fucking and dropping loads in each other. Gave it a 2 because fucking isn't all bad🙂

This reads more like a newspaper article -- maybe even a P.I.'s report -- of what happened. It's mostly just the details. At least you didn't write it in 1st person.

Well not bad for the first article, I am not an english major. I am used to writing reports, warrants, and case reviews so I will try and do better to make them a little more appealing. Thanks for your comments they will help me improve.

It wasn’t the story, that had great potential. It was the rushed format and mixing of names that made it boring. I will never understand why people read stories that they don’t like just so they have something to complain about.

Dumb

No one lays in snow melt water, The water can be as cold as 30 Degrees. -2 c

Hey kiddo, yo betta quit scribbling. Ya to infantile fo such writing, pussy, cock, ficky ficky, ya know, that’s fo adults.

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