All Comments on 'Camping By The Lake With Friends'

People don't shutter. That kicked down to only 4, sorry.

nice. very nice

Nice, compact stary, but still covering all the bases of best friends sharing each other. I hope there is a chapter two on the way.

Well done!

2nd person sucks and is an automatic rating of 1.

Love the collective way as a couple your stories read.

Keep going, looking for more.

This reminded me of why I dislike stories written in the 2nd person.

Hate 2nd person stories, nothing worse