All Comments on 'Candid Tale of Candy's D.P.'

by HowieAndCandy

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AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Beyond this being a dumb story, the writing was beyond horrendous. Either get an editor and learn about basic English writing structure or find another hobby. Nowhere for you to go but up.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Great first story please keep writing I loved it ❤️

DomCowboy69DomCowboy694 months ago

Amazing story! A total turn on and wonderfully written. Hopefully, You'll go down the bondage trail someday and loosen your boundaries a little more.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I disagree with the first commenter. It reads like you were TELLING it to us. What makes it so fucking hot is that right there. This story made me fucking HARD.

HotdiggitydogHotdiggitydog3 months ago

Great DP story. Very erotic. 5 stars

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