by HowieAndCandy
Beyond this being a dumb story, the writing was beyond horrendous. Either get an editor and learn about basic English writing structure or find another hobby. Nowhere for you to go but up.
Amazing story! A total turn on and wonderfully written. Hopefully, You'll go down the bondage trail someday and loosen your boundaries a little more.
I disagree with the first commenter. It reads like you were TELLING it to us. What makes it so fucking hot is that right there. This story made me fucking HARD.