All Comments on 'Candy's Fashion House Ch. 16'

Lauren is sick, twisted and disgusting. And Michael is pathetic beyond what is expected.

This is the end for me.

The award for biggest cunt goes to Lauren. The award for selfish bitch goes to Lauren. I love this story, but I hate Lauren. I truly hope karma gives her a bitch slap of epic proportions

Love the story, and have really enjoyed reading it. The constant fighting and tension caused by Lauren is a bit of a drag though. Hope there is a happily ever after moment eventually, and that Kelli finds peace and love. I'm hoping its with Siobhan.

If Kelli ends up with Josh because of Lauren’s manipulation then I am so done with this story. She gave Kelli hormones in a way that put her health seriously at risk!!! She puts her personal desires above everything else in their lives. Nothing is as important to Lauren as Lauren. She is a really bad person. If the moral of this story is “Lauren knows best” it will be horrible. I don’t care if Kelli does or doesn’t end up enjoying sex with men. I will just be incredibly disappointed if Lauren’s selfishness is rewarded.

You are right about Kelli needing an experiment and found out that males in a sexual nature has no place for her, but being around guys in a non meat market setting Kelli is confidant and surefooted knowing the setting is not sexually driven other than playful catcalls because no groping going on. Alecia is one of types that really fell in love with Lauren and will keep coming back to her no matter what. it also feels like Alecia has acceptedly growing very fond and becoming in love with Kelli because in her mind she does not see Michael nor does she want to have sex with a male but being a female her whole life she understands the club life.

Kelli needs to tell Maddie that she is Michael for Maddie doesn't get blindsided one day by the truth and then Michael can find out more about Lauren's extracurricular activities

may not work for everybody but why can't Kelli stay lesbian

wise up you moved out get out and stay away lauren is a bitch and always will be she is really pushing for kelli to be gay should have divoriced the slut when she was going out with other men and probably having sex just doesn't have the guts to tell kelli definetly time to move on to other people please don't let lauren win have kelli get ahead of her

part of me wants to see things continue as they are and force kelli into a foursome with josh and another part of me wants Kelli to tell Lauren to fk off and ditch her with Alecia

Lauren relies on people's love and uses that love to manipulate them. The sex is wonderful for all who have sex with Lauren. So that is her "catch". If she can have sex with person that appears to make everything alright. So Alecia and Michael/Kelli get worn down and the make-up sex helps make everything better for a short time and then Lauren another "itch" for sex . So far she has had Alecia, Mike now Kelli and now wants other men for sex.

Lauren want the best of all worlds but that is not enough for her. She has manipulated two people into loving her and that is still not enough.

I think Alecia is complicit and she will do whatever makes Lauren "happy". She is as much a victim of Lauren's manipulation as Mike/Kelli has been, but Mike has made the biggest concession, giving up his masculinity.

Kelli is infatuated with Josh. She has become an attractive tv/woman and Josh has shown interest and respects Kelli's thoughts and feelings. Any person will be attracted to that. Kelli is experiencing a new life and with this new life comes to new thoughts, feelings and interactions.

I would like to see true justice for all. I hope there is a happy ending for everyone involved.

I must admit I am hooked to this story and can't wait for the next chapter.

I wish that they would come sooner....

Just leave Kelli. Pick your own path, your own l ju de and your own lovers. DO MIT let that skank pressure, brow beat, and manipulate who you are with. You want to be translesbian, cool, you want to be bi, then do it. But do it for yourself, not that freaking bitch Lauren

you know you have a hit story when you get over a comment per hour, great job writing. and i will admit i too am a follower.

I wasnt expecting 16 so quick. I'm still loving it but it would appear I'm not alone in my dislike of Lauren and her manipulative ways. It seems like its a total power and control thing with her. She gets off on pushing people into things they dont want.

Holy crap. Ditch the crappy relationship. Siobhan is patiently waiting in the wings and Kelli is getting steamrolled by these two. Love the story and the characters but it is a revolving door with Alecia and Lauren. Let the conniving wife go and find the new relationship waiting for you.

If Lauren would give the divorce Kelli would move on and become herself.

Now Josh would be able to be with her she'd be able to feel comfortable with him

Split Kelli and Lauren

Legally and let them move on don't split them as a couple

I love the story. I hate self serving people. I want Kelli to be happy. I want Lauren to be miserable and alone. Perhaps a complete emotional cripple. Everybody else extremely happy7

This has been a great story so far. Even though I hate Lauren, that makes the story better- although it is getting to the point of being unbelievable that anyone would stay with her.

Please stop with Kelli going gay. Every story follows that line. Just because he dresses does not mean he wants to be with men. That does not happen. He may like the feeling of being wanted, but that does not lead to gay sex. So tired of stories going that way.

Great Story! Maybe selfish Lauren is actuallr right like Alecia said?

Just read all the chapters of this great story. Normally I don't comment here but I really really liked it, thank your for writing this. Can't wait to see how it continues and hoping for a happy end. :)

Traps are everywhere. Alecia has fallen into one. She will go along with anything Lauren says just to be with her. Even if it means she has to help coerce Kelli in to doing into whatever Lauren wants. Kelli likes Josh, but not because she is gay, but because she can identify with his shyness. I believe her when she said she went out with him when she had identity questions. The trap Lauren sets for all is she wants it all and all her way, at the expense of everyone's boundaries, likes,and dislikes. I hope the story goes with Kelli being happy in life, not subservient to someone

I've read every chapter so far and it's long past the point where Kelli should file for a divorce. Lauren is an insufferable bitch who is obviously very deceitful and untrustworthy. I'm starting to get annoyed with almost all the characters as it's feeling like the drama is being recycled.

My advice, end it and move on already!

I'm sorry to say that I'm done reading this series even if you publish more. In the last two chapters, I count two paragraphs of sex that were very quickly described.

This site is called Literotica. You seem to have forgotten to include the erotica. What happened to phrases like "tented panties" or "as I slipped the panties on, my erection was so hard it was difficult to get it in the panties" or even better still " as I stood there, Alicia rubbed my cock as it waas straining against the material of my pencil skirt"

You have a great opportunity to have a really erotic story don't waste it.

Another incredible story of the Metamorphosis that is Kelli, I so live this series!

I have to disagree with one of the comments, although I love the sex scenes, I think the characters are engaging and their interactions are believable and I enjoy the story line, please don’t change a thing. Also, I’m i the only one pulling for Alecia and Kelli to be a couple on their own without Lauren?

We've seen all this before. Lauren tries to force Michael to do something, he says No, she keeps pressing and scheming, he finally gets fed up and leaves forever, then comes back and does what she wants. It's like that group of girls in high school, constantly fighting, but "can't" live without each other. Boring, stupid, and only serves to show how pathetically spineless Michael truly is.

That was it? I think Kelli and Lauren should be divorced! Maybe in the next chapter Kelli should file charges against Lauren for giving her pills! She gets disbarred and thrown in prison where another psycho inmate murders her! Only story line to end her lying deceitful ways! Doubtful that Alecia stops being a lesbian but marries Kelli after Laurens demise! Josh was a hot topic in the very last paragraph and the chapter didn't leave me satisfied! How about Kelli loves her job and finds a true love with any of the characters already mentioned Siobhan? Alecia? Maddison? Time will tell for Kelli...knowing she still wants her functioning penis she may have to find a woman happy with her as she is understanding she is not gay loving who she is!

I love this series and the one with Mimi, they are like my favorite guilty pleasure tv shows with incredible sex

I'm beginning to think this entire series was a giant waste of time.

The only likable character left in this series is Siobhan. Kelli must just be a glutton for abuse and manipulation with how she keeps going back. When your relationship is so bad that you have to keep an apartment to sleep in because you leave so often, it might be a sign to give up.