All Comments on 'Can't Say No Ch. 05'

I really like how this psychological thriller is playing out. I only wish the chapters were longer. The slow destruction of Jessie's will and foreshadowed submission is excitingly wicked. The more she fights it, the more her body tends to betray her, and from a readers perspective this contrast is more enticing than classic noncon/reluctance stories. Credit to the author for scenes like the soccer match, where we see the byproduct of Jessie's multiple assaults not only affect her psyche, social, and sexual life, but also take away any pleasure/accolades she may have found in escapism's like sports. Hearing the malicious justification and provocative backstory of some of the men preying on Jess also makes the world you've described much more intimidating.

I look forward to reading about Jessie, her mother, and her neighbor at dinner. Sounds like a promising direction with potential for pregnancy scares for both women.

Thank you.

Keep this story coming!

I literally devoured that so quickly. Thank you so much for continuing the story.

Looks like the walls are closing in on jess I wonder how long she can avoid pregnancy for

Jessie's mom must be in a truly desperate situation to invite the pig from next door over and I assume look to him as a future husband even knowing that it will probably result in the daily rape and impregnation of her daughter

Takes some imagination to come up with interesting stories and I found yours VERY interesting!!!

Poor Jessie facing daily rape by the neighbour maybe a marriage offer would even be worth it just another source of power men have over women in this situation

I’m rooting for the girl. I hope she doesn’t get pregnant!

Great work, a pleasure to read.

That's her plan B used up I wonder if she can get another and if so what will the price be

This is the best series of stories and I'm loving it. Thanks

Fantastic work hope to see chapter 6 soon

Fans self. wow. just keeps getting hotter and hotter. Hungry for more. :)

Fucking hot. Makes me so wet to think about random men on the street ordering me to suck them off while they decide if they want to breed me.

Great story. Hope u continue writing more chapters. Fun story to read. Ty

This chapter had me on the edge of my seat and I can't wait to read more

I wonder how long she can hold off pregnancy with the oral strategy seems like something most older men would see though

Fantastic work so far

This is one of my absolute favourite series and I come back to it time and time again. I really hope you continue with another chapter soon!

Seriously one of the best series I have read here. And a lot of other places.

Consolidate it, expand it, publish it. I'd buy it.

The system corrupts even a relatively timid and unconfident boy I love it.

Amazing!

Very nice story. The characters have depth and feeling. Technically your writing style is immaculate like a professional author.

Another great Chapter.

Another character in Principal Walker indulging his kinks on a helpless Jessie, will she end up having to "settle down" with one of the older men like Walker or Stephenson just to get some protection against the daily rapes she faces?

The scene with Brett was great too how quickly the toxic attitude towards women grows without anything to keep it in check.

Absolutely humiliating for Jessie i love it good chapter.

The contrast between Brett and Jessie is quite telling the shy boy emboldened by his new found power now with the confidence to take what he want's while the confident and outgoing Jessie has to debase herself and play the meek and eager girl. The panic attack was nicely written as well.